|Reviews for Burned|
| ADAFwehoijfrnjAaDfd GAD 6/2/09 . chapter 1
pretty good. I liked it.
| tangledwebweweave 6/1/09 . chapter 1
very nice. raw and emotionful. i can completely agree, one-hundred percent. i like the connection with the bracelet, it's unique to do that.
some of the lines seem a bit too long, but that's okay.
love your writing style.
keep it up. :)
favorite line: "There's an ache in my heart,"
| I'll Break Your Heart 6/1/09 . chapter 1
This is deep. I really really like this. oh my gosh. If this is like based off real life I hope you work it out. :)
| LadyReaderofBooks 5/31/09 . chapter 1
I really like this.
| Invalid Account 5/31/09 . chapter 1
Is Time capitalized for a reason? What is it meant to symbolize?
Anyway, I like your poem, its got a sad sort of reminiscent vibe to it. I usually don't read poetry, but I have to admit the title caught my attention. Nice job.
| exsibilation 5/31/09 . chapter 1
Wow...that was really good. It totally relates to what I'm going through right now...more so than my poetry. Keep up the good work.