pretty good. I liked it.

very nice. raw and emotionful. i can completely agree, one-hundred percent. i like the connection with the bracelet, it's unique to do that.

some of the lines seem a bit too long, but that's okay.

love your writing style.

keep it up. :)

favorite line: "There's an ache in my heart,"

This is deep. I really really like this. oh my gosh. If this is like based off real life I hope you work it out. :)

I really like this.

Is Time capitalized for a reason? What is it meant to symbolize?

Anyway, I like your poem, its got a sad sort of reminiscent vibe to it. I usually don't read poetry, but I have to admit the title caught my attention. Nice job.

Wow...that was really good. It totally relates to what I'm going through right now...more so than my poetry. Keep up the good work.

XOXO,

Liz