hmmahm, I liked it, very good work!

this was great, i especially like the italicized lines sort of backing up the line before only adding so much more feeling to it. i think there are so many, including me, who can connect to this.
Write on!
and i definitely agree. there should be an international "Be Happy Day"

Very sad poem, but I liked it! I like how you were saying like "I'll laugh, pretend I'm enjoying life" and then in the italics, contradicting that. Good poem! And yes, there SHOULD be an internation "Be Happy Day!" That would be awesome!

Loved:
"I’ll shout, pretend I don’t have a care in the world

Why doesn’t the world care for me?"

Beautifully done, though I did feel that some of the things in italics didn't pack enough emotion.

And yes, it does make sense:)