So beautiful and emotive. I love the ending. :)

Just lovely. Great imagery used throughout this, it's like you've painted a picture with words :)

Like in the other piece not liking the italics or the double dots. I do like the piece though, I think it's really sweet and you have some great word choices. I also love those last two lines. It's such a beautiful idea.

if we just close our eyes at the same time,
we’ll meet in the sky”...that line just killed me. Thanks for this poem.

I like this, good work!
Faith

"And I can't seem to remember this fleeting reverie." Brilliant line. The tone is so angsty and graceful. :)