Excellent story. Love the understated relationship between the two guys. Bravo!

I loved the ending: it was really cute! I'm glad that Zyan found Rogher and everything ended well.

aww. so cute! what a wonderful ending. I'm glad everything is going to be okay for Zyan!

ooh, goody! another chapter :)
i've really fixated on this story, so unless you want me to eat my fingers from all the narrative tension, please hurry! :P come on, rogher to the rescue!

I really like how you described Zyan in these last chapters. I love this story so far!

Ah. things are looking up for our luvvy minstrel! Not way, way up, but up... assuming he figures out how to play with his wounds, alas.

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Qui

wow! two chapters at once! how you spoil us.

Sad chapters, too, although at least Zyan is okay-ish for now... I can't wait to read more; the suspense is horrible.

Qui

Thank goodness you posted chapter 12! It would have been truly evil to leave us with 11's cliffhanger! Poor Zyan! I think you've captured his physical and mental breakdown quite well, without expanding it into the melodramatical. Well done! Please hurry chapter 13 along, I sense our poor minstrel needs some loving comfort!

Yay! You are not dead! and your writing again! This makes me very happy, as does this story so far. I'm glad you're back, and I look forward to seeing where this story goes!

Love and cookies,
Qui

Poor Zyan!I hope nothing too bad will happen to him

I really like this story so far!

interesting start. i'd like to see where you're planning on taking this. : )

This story is really interesting so far. I like these carachter, especially Zian. I hoe you'll update soon: I'm curious to know what will happen during the journey

Hi!
I've recently read your story Ravens, Owls and a Nightingale and I've enjoyed it very much. So, I'm very glad to see this new story. I'm really liking it so far. I hope that you will update soon!