This story is REALLY good, are you going to update soon?

I just randomly started reading the last sentance I know that is a bad thing but me and my friend are misunderstanding whats happening but you know that happens.

Persephone handled the situation fairly well- I expected her to go on a rampage, but she was mature about it so that's great. However, an apology from Hades wouldn't hurt! But then again, it was suppose to be a sneaky act and it does add drama to the story. This trip to the Lethe should be interesting!

i must say that i'm really happy you have a fp account because i've been following this story worthy of love on aff and its a real killer because i have to check back everyday to see if you've updated :(

but anyway, kinda annoyed that part of seph wants to forgive aidon. like, seriously! castrate that mother- okay let's not get into that lol. but yes, i think another 2 chapters of anger at aidon should do it :)

thanks for finally updating! i can finally r.i.p :)

Hm I love this chapter, you've really worked Persephone's reaction very well - from shock and disbelief, to anger and betrayal, and finally cold seething and calculating. I would have mentioned her trying to spit the seeds out earlier though; I was thinking while reading "Why doesn't she try to throw them up or something? That might have been the first reaction for most people..."

That said, you're also ensured people don't hate Hades for what he's done, by working him up to have a simplistic view, or at least lacks the people skills to be able to understand that THAT'S JUST NOT WHAT YOU DO.

Well done mate, awesome job :)

-llashan

A little bit of wonderful. I love your story.

Oh no. I hope she doesn't mean to make herself forget everything...

But great job! I loved this scene. I loved how you managed to balance dialogue and description perfectly well!

She's not going to be happy with him. Well at first. Maybe she'll get over it... Loved it! I like to review here and read on AFF because the story just seems to miss something without it

love you for this story!

They had such a good time and made such a huge step in their relationship...why did Hades had to screw it up? I hope Persephone puts him in his place!

Omg please make her be furious with him! i'll go crazy if i read another story where a woman has let the man dominate and control her. But great story.

Ohh... I think Hades is going to be in for it.

he's toast!

I finally caught up with your story, and I wanted to let you know that I am loving it. I like the parallels of Persephone starving herself because she is not ready to fully submit to Zeus to Demeter's starving the world's people because she wants Zeus and Hades to give her child back to her.

Wonderful I hope this gets published