YES I HAVE FINALLY CAUGHT UP! now may u plzzs update in the next 48 hours :)

You can tell the passion you have for writing. Darkness Becomes Her is truly brilliant! I love how you don't just concentrate on Persephone and Hedes but give insights to other gods as well and give them all fitting and believable characters.

As for titles, here a few ideas:

She Becomes the Darkness

The Queen of Darkness

From the Light to Darkness

Queen of the Underworld

The Dark Lord Finds his Queen

Drawn to Darkness

Queen of Shadows

The Dark Queen

Queen of Death

Loving of Death

Shadow's Bride

Bride of Darkness

Hopefully one of these gives you inspiration for a fitting title. I loved the last paragraph, it was so real! I also love the frequent updates!

i really love the last paragraphs. they like a normal couple, not god and goddess. please update soon

I LOVE YOU CULTOFSTRAWBERRY :D

Oh, the story's almost over! But this was a wonderful chapter and well worth the wait!

I think this was the best written chapter you have written, ever. I lovelove what you did with Persephone and Hades. Seriously, you have developed these characters so well, the readers feel like they know the characters well. You also closed the issues between Hades and Demeter really well, kudos to you. Awesome job!

lovely chapter. can't wait for the next one to come out. you're dong a wonderful job and i'm eager to buy your book once it's published. :)

Love this story. Persephone seems to be spending a lot of time away from Hades. Like to see more interaction between those two, they are such a good couple. Keep us posted as to your publishing - I would recommend this story to many of my friends -in fact some of them have read it online. Thanks for updating and keeping the story going - so many good stories start but are never updated or finished. You have an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing it with us. PS - like the shadow-tentacles too.

I F* hate u now! How dare you say that u hate Percy Jackson and the Olympians! That happens to be my favorite series in the world! Gr if ur story werent so good I would stop reading it!

AW! thats so cute! im still a third of the way to finishing ur story but so far its really good. keep on writing!

Question! Question! Ok on The Book Reader Addicts Facebook page it mentioned a book by this name (Darkness Becomes Her) and is that just a qaincadence(Humm don't think i spelled that right!) or did you actually publish it? Because if you Published it then horray for YOU! Because this an amazeing book written by a Fantastic writer!

So when does hades actually come into play with Kora?

This is extremely good writing! And I am so glad that you did research. It makes the story fuller, and richer in context. I love fics about the Greek mythology and the Greek Gods and Goddesses. Thank you for writing such a substantial story about them. :) I can't wait to read more!

I think this is a very good story and the fact that the chapters are really long and that you have like what 53 chapters. That's a really big feat to accomplish. Anyways i think this story is really good and i hope it gets better.

I lovee this story!

You make Hades and Persephone sososo lovable :)

But, I feel as if you are making Persephone too distanced from Hades in the sense that he loves her a lot, but she doesn't seem to return the favor as much as he does.

Update soon!

:)