GAH such a good chapter! I can't wait for more!


GO TEAM TIERAN!!
hehe...I feel like a crazed Twilight fan...

I definately did not expect that preposition. Though I knew she would say 'no' and for the right reasons it was very comforting to know that Quisa has a good head on her shoulders.
=)

True to her character.

I didn't realise you had a sequel going on! I've finally caught up, and am loving it!

Glad they made it there alright, but I have a feeling that Quisa using her abilities rather hurt their cause. Hopefully Quisa learns waiting isn't always a bad thing.

After such a long time without an update, this is really refreshing. Yeah, college life tends to be hectic, and stories often get affected. In fact, I just started writing again after months of being busy with classes and extra-curricular activities.
Anyway, good chapter. I find it interesting how different Lasorre is from Sederia. Or from any kingdom I've really heard about in stories. I kind of get the vibe that the prince is more than a little corrupt. But I'll just be patient.

Good luck with school, and have a nice day!

Oh i did not expect you to update for some strnage reason:P Sorry about short review last time but i was in a mood:P Well this is a nice chapter, i particularly liked the prince. I kinda guessed he was more powerful then he let on. And quisas power didnt work. Im quite happy its not an all poweful controller. Makes the story intresting.

FINALLY!

Wow, they're finally there. I had kind of forgotten the line of action for a while.

I kind of like Snyder, kind of don't. I mean, he seems kind of suspicious to me. But I'm just being paranoid.

PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER A LIRO CHAPTER!

it feels like I haven't reviewed for so long. D: forgive me!

I rather like the Lasorrean prince. his lack of reaction to Quisa's powers makes me wonder what he's actually thinking.. interesting kind of person. I hope he stays for a few more chapters. :D

and my favourite part of this chapter was Tieran's journal, where he keeps dirty drawings of Quisa. XD

absolutely lovely, as usual.

:D

Awesome chapter, love the saving the whale part and I can't wait for the pirate encounter. Especially liked the dialogue between Tieran and Quisa very cute.

YES! I LOVED it. :) I just loved it, geez I'm so excited for the next chapter.

I think you got me for a second with the Liro saying he didn't like Quisa, but I am gullible so ... huh! And, oh Tieran! I just love it when boys try hard but still don't get it.

Moar dwama, oh noes!

I'm not worried about Kikuli, because I know that Liro loves Quisa anyway. Adorable.
Although I'm a bit worried that if Callin doesn't get enough... um, for lack of a better word, screen time, he'll commit emo suicide. Seriously, he's practically going all Sasuke Uchiha on us--downsized to glaring and standing menacingly in a corner!
Not that I'm comparing Quisa to Sakura, then... she's WAY more awesome than Sakura.

Sorry about the Naruto references, by the way.

Tieran imitating Callin? Brilliant.

I am so glad you updated! I've been waiting, and now that the new chapter's here, I'm so glad! It was a great chapter!

PIRATES! WHEE!

YES, YES, YES! This chapter was amazing... I love the Liro & Kikuli drama, and its hilarious to see just how hard Tieran's trying to win over Quisa. So was I right in my prediction that Tieran was going to try to kiss Quisa? I think I was...

Can't wait for the next epic, drama-filled, awesometastic chapter!
~TreeWhisperer

Yay Tieran! :) I think Liro was lying. But I dunno.

PIRATES!

Well the love hexagon has gotten intresting.