 the grimm cow orker 2009-06-20 . chapter 1You reviewed my James story, so here's a return one for you. XD
This was cute, the video was a nice touch. I do have one thing to critique, you used second person a couple times and you switched tenses a few times (after James recounted their meeting, that is to say he was narrating in the past tense when he should have been in the present, or else the earlier present tenses were wrong.)
Haha, Bond, James Bond.
Ciao,
+Andy |