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Reviews For: A Letter To You
Fuzzy-Kimmi 2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Awesome story! =D I was worried you were going to make a depressing ending because alot of people seemed to be doing that lately so I'm happy they got a happy ending! Keep up the awesomeness xD
Matt a.k.a- stew 2009-07-03 . chapter 1
well the little emo kid says that the love seem real but not alot of details of the action *could be good or bad* but it was a good story over all.
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the grimm cow orker 2009-06-20 . chapter 1
You reviewed my James story, so here's a return one for you. XD

This was cute, the video was a nice touch. I do have one thing to critique, you used second person a couple times and you switched tenses a few times (after James recounted their meeting, that is to say he was narrating in the past tense when he should have been in the present, or else the earlier present tenses were wrong.)

Haha, Bond, James Bond.

Ciao,

+Andy
Rainfire 2009-06-18 . chapter 1
yummy story!*licks a lollipop*XD lol no but it was a good story but now it made me sad just thinking of my Jake...I wish he would just understand how I feel about him and stop going with everyone else and teasing me about my addiction of ccats...*sniff*where's my love?
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