i love ur story please please please update soon

OMG, I love your story!

GASP!
LE NO!

This story is the best!
This is way to good to just be on a pretty crappy website!
This would acually be like, a good book

Wow, this was a very... uh,... re... I have nothing to say honestly

XD!
I LOVE THIS STORY! XD

This whole sentence could be one big sexual innuendo honey.
"Upon finding it, he shoved it into its keyhole and jerked it sideways, shivering in place as he did."
I like it. =D

So far this is really good, so I think I stay up till 3 and read it. :P Just catch up on my sleep at school. :)

You know what?

I FUCKING LIKE IT. Yes. That's right. I'm addicted to yet another abused-kid story. Psh. But this is different.

I bet lots of people feel the need to tell you their favorite character. I bet they're like "aw, Daniel's so cuute," and "aw, Derek's so sexitastic,"-- all of which is true of course, but... my favorite is totally Jack. I don't know. I have a soft spot for hot French-Canadian guys? Plus his name is Jack. Well, Jacques. Which is basically Jack, anyway. So whatever. Jack or Jacques, it's a beautiful name and he's my favorite and I want to hug him and kick Derek because he should love Jack, the stupid prick.

I mean, obviously Derek and Daniel are amazing together. I like them, too... but I just feel so bad for Jack. Because he's so cute. And I love him. And he's so sad. And I would be so pissed, too, if some random emo kid came in and ruined my casual sexual relationship with my ex-boyfriend/love-of-my-life. But Jack's so chill about it. I mean, he's sad, yeah. But like. IDK. I just really like him. And I thought you should know. That is all. I want to see more, though. Sheesh. Seriously.

Wow, that is busy. Ouch. Good luck :)

I really enjoyed reading this chapter! It was so cute and amusing. I liked the way you write Daniel's thoughts; they're amusing, and I like the sudden change in the flow of them.

I also like the way you write the characters; they're all very likeable :)

Good luck with later chapters, and managing all the stuff you have going on.

~YukinoKara

I'd just like to say that i love this story. It's one of the only slash fics i've read that doesn't move too fast, which is good. You're also really good at describing things and giving a mental image. update soon plz!!

Yay! It's good that you're not dead! And that you updated! Yay! I'm sorry you're super anxious though, I'm getting there myself. Today my hands were shaking so hard that I had trouble holding a pencil but it stopped after a couple of hours. I hope you can sleep san meds soon, it really is better that way. The chapter was awesome, I wonder how Daniel's gonna react to his ex. Dun dun dun dun...

Thank u for updating! I was literally checking FictionPress every five seconds to see if this updated. Luv the chapter!

I really really like this story. It's quite adorable, and you're an excellent author. Please write more!

=] -Dani

God, Derek still doesn't know the secret? Anywayz, this chapter looked as if it was all about the physical and emotional attraction between them...I wanna know what Derek was thinking, dammit!!
Anywayz, good to know you're still alive. I mean, I just started reading your story so I wouldn't know but if this story is left alone, I'll be VERY ANGRY!! So update...when you feel like it but please do update!!

oh my god

you are amazing.
this is amazing.

im so excited to find out what dereks reaction will be when he finds out about daniels past.

UPDATE AND I WILL WORSHIP YOU
LIKE. MORE THAN I ALREADY DO