Haha my name is shay!

awsommee storiee.* =)
please continue

The four siblings are interesting together, especially Shay and Kellan. It's a bit of a copout to make G and V twins because that's so overdone, unless there's some sort of cool backstory between them having to do with their demon origin.

Would like to see more of a plotline because so far they've.. gone to high school. Hopefully Matt Rettley and his grudge comes back into play to see how far Kellan will go to protect Shay.

Hope you aren't offended by my comments, just wanted to give you my two cents :)

this story is so good! please update soon! The plot is so interesting

wow! wow! wow! this story and it's deep intriguing characters have me addicted! I can't wait for more, the hidden meanings and suspense have me hooked!

Wow.
This is awesome.
You're so fricken talented. I don't get how you do it. Every story you write has some crazy beginning that pulls everyone in and then it gets better and better.
Great main character as always. Always original. =)
I wish you'd update this. Even more than Brady Remington Landed Me In Jail and I love that story.
Update soon please.

This story is just getting good! Please don't stop now!! I hope you update soon. I love all your stories. Your writing is just awesome!!

This probably has to be one of the most intense stories I've ever read! Good job, I can't wait to see how the dynamics of the siblings change!

This story is very well-written! Intriguing...at least now I know WHAT they are, but I still don't know what being descended from a demon means...
Please update soon!

I'm hooked. I love the intensity of this story and I look forward to your next update.
:]

Nicely written, strong characters.
It seems like it will be a very nice plot .
Shay seems to be a little different the the others can't wait to find out why.

Nice to find out that the lead female seems to be stronger then the lead male most authors can't pull this off correctly.

Over all this seems to be starting off nicely.

Work on grammar though.

OMG, this story is so GOD! I hope there is something hot between Kellan and Shay ;) update soon please! You are the best.

I love this story!

i'm hooked so far ;) strong characters and suspenseful writing.
i wonder if Shay isn't really related to the other two...completely different looks, personality. i really hope so, actually, because it seems like there's this romantic edge to Kellan and Shay's relationship--and i'm not a fan of incest.

i liked the Braden debate in this chapter, but Vesper's words at the end didn't work for me. it seems like you're trying to fit in Shay's dramatic last line, but it was set awkwardly. Vesper is a sophomore, younger than Shay, yet he comments about her being only a high school girl. also, the remark isn't really one that would cause everyone to gasp in shock--it's not particularly witty, biting, or challenging. Sorry if I sound picky about it--it just doesn't seem like a strong enough lead-in for Shay's statement about her being more than a high school girl.

waiting for the next chapter! 8D
~arydesia

very intense.

update soon.