 MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 23This was upsetting becuz I'm sick and i thought this would be a fun chapter but it made me lasugh anyways.
"If i wanted them to have sex, believe me you'd know." Oh really?? lol
Have fun with your paper and good luck on your test.
Happy Thanksgivin' |
 ThatWasWierd 2009-11-29 . chapter 23those people are sick! I wasn't even thinking about that!! Ew
I like seeing Korean dramas! There awesome |
 ShadowBrilliance 2009-11-29 . chapter 23Lol, that was a funny note. Lol, and I do hate these author notes, they annoy me, lol. THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE FALSE HOPE! (Sarcasm), lol. Update soon on a chapter, pllease!
-I Heart ?- |
 pbgurl 2009-11-28 . chapter 23LOL! I don't mind the authors note at all. I actually had a feeling that you may send one letting it be known they didn't have sex. I'll definatley admit I was on the fence on whether they did or not but I'm glad you clarified it.
Good luck with the essays and I hope the school semester is going well. But just think, a few more weeks until winter break.
Happy Thanksgiving! ^_^
-Liz :D |
 fyredea1994 2009-11-28 . chapter 23Yeah I thought this was a chapter, my hopes and dreams were just smooshed. Thanks. XD. Just kidding, Oh my god, I have an 8-10 poage paper due on the 4th, probably not as complicated as yours but still. Curse Essays!! Curse them!!. |
 MarloCarlo10 2009-11-27 . chapter 22Aw poor Mel and her mom!
John just needs to tell his sister off and fight for Mel because I can see why she doesn't trust him.
No Melinda and John, why'd you have to do it? I love them but sex obviously didn't solve anything...
It was so sweet of John to come to the funeral and be there for Melinda and her mom
Good chap! |
 michaeljacksonlovaa 2009-11-27 . chapter 22Thise chapter was so intense, but i still love it! update soon. :) |
 StorieLuver101 2009-11-24 . chapter 22Im a little Disapointed in your secound storie "Ray of Sunshine 2, the sequel. I am a fan of your first storie , the Ray of Sunshine. I think it was close to flawless with a few mistakes which is ok becuase everyone makes mistakes, I get that. It had an Awsome Plot, Always Kept me guessing, And Iread it in as little as 2 days with almost no sleeping or eating required.(Shows you how good I liked it :). As I started reading The sequel I was Also Captivated with it until it got to the part where they went to New York. I mean its really good and I am Totally not dissing your work at all because I totally admire you, just a little option and Constucive Critissm. I think its sorta dragging. Its not really grabbing my attention. Like the beggining was great and all to this secound storie but it is now becoming boring I guess. Like i really dont care any more. I think you need something Unexpected to happend. A major twist in the plot to get it back on track and interesting again. Again I am not trying to bring you down and tell you to stop writing cuz as I said I luv Your Work but do something to keep it going. Get it...Hope U Dont Take offence.:) |
 JessiLawry 2009-11-23 . chapter 22so sad! *tear* please update! |
 Lolipop9466 2009-11-23 . chapter 22omg amazing chapter!
i was srsly crying while reading it and it rly annoyed me cuz the tears made it harder for me to read cuz of the bluriness!
its such a sad chapterr... the beginning, the middle, and the end... omg the end... i wanna cry again :( JohnxMelinda plzz make them be together again!
ugh plz update soon! |
 Freak Of Music 2009-11-23 . chapter 22This has truly been one of the best chap ive read in a long time and this really made me cry!
Plz try to update ASAP! |
 sing gal 2009-11-23 . chapter 22drama drama drama!but whats life without drama?!
anyways the chapter was very nice and i enjoyed reading it though it was soo sad
and i hope you can update soon!
thanks... |
 yasminooo 2009-11-23 . chapter 22did they do it or not ( have sex ) ??
btw, nice chapter =D
bt dnt let them get back together soon cuz john is an ass !! :( :) |
 yuenmei 2009-11-23 . chapter 22LOVELY!! at least they're heading towards solving their problems now!! im soo glad they managed to converse with each other! but i hope john will start fighting harder for melinda!! plas let them get bck together soon!! i cant stand the suspense! |
 9Arsenic3 2009-11-23 . chapter 22my condolences to you on the passing of your grandmother. Sigh, mel keeps running away |