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MidnightRythm1990 2009-11-30 . chapter 23
This was upsetting becuz I'm sick and i thought this would be a fun chapter but it made me lasugh anyways.

"If i wanted them to have sex, believe me you'd know." Oh really?? lol

Have fun with your paper and good luck on your test.
Happy Thanksgivin'
ThatWasWierd 2009-11-29 . chapter 23
those people are sick! I wasn't even thinking about that!! Ew
I like seeing Korean dramas! There awesome
ShadowBrilliance 2009-11-29 . chapter 23
Lol, that was a funny note. Lol, and I do hate these author notes, they annoy me, lol. THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE FALSE HOPE! (Sarcasm), lol. Update soon on a chapter, pllease!

-I Heart ?-
pbgurl 2009-11-28 . chapter 23
LOL! I don't mind the authors note at all. I actually had a feeling that you may send one letting it be known they didn't have sex. I'll definatley admit I was on the fence on whether they did or not but I'm glad you clarified it.

Good luck with the essays and I hope the school semester is going well. But just think, a few more weeks until winter break.

Happy Thanksgiving! ^_^

-Liz :D
fyredea1994 2009-11-28 . chapter 23
Yeah I thought this was a chapter, my hopes and dreams were just smooshed. Thanks. XD. Just kidding, Oh my god, I have an 8-10 poage paper due on the 4th, probably not as complicated as yours but still. Curse Essays!! Curse them!!.
MarloCarlo10 2009-11-27 . chapter 22
Aw poor Mel and her mom!

John just needs to tell his sister off and fight for Mel because I can see why she doesn't trust him.

No Melinda and John, why'd you have to do it? I love them but sex obviously didn't solve anything...

It was so sweet of John to come to the funeral and be there for Melinda and her mom

Good chap!
michaeljacksonlovaa 2009-11-27 . chapter 22
Thise chapter was so intense, but i still love it! update soon. :)
StorieLuver101 2009-11-24 . chapter 22
Im a little Disapointed in your secound storie "Ray of Sunshine 2, the sequel. I am a fan of your first storie , the Ray of Sunshine. I think it was close to flawless with a few mistakes which is ok becuase everyone makes mistakes, I get that. It had an Awsome Plot, Always Kept me guessing, And Iread it in as little as 2 days with almost no sleeping or eating required.(Shows you how good I liked it :). As I started reading The sequel I was Also Captivated with it until it got to the part where they went to New York. I mean its really good and I am Totally not dissing your work at all because I totally admire you, just a little option and Constucive Critissm. I think its sorta dragging. Its not really grabbing my attention. Like the beggining was great and all to this secound storie but it is now becoming boring I guess. Like i really dont care any more. I think you need something Unexpected to happend. A major twist in the plot to get it back on track and interesting again. Again I am not trying to bring you down and tell you to stop writing cuz as I said I luv Your Work but do something to keep it going. Get it...Hope U Dont Take offence.:)
JessiLawry 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
so sad! *tear* please update!
Lolipop9466 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
omg amazing chapter!
i was srsly crying while reading it and it rly annoyed me cuz the tears made it harder for me to read cuz of the bluriness!
its such a sad chapterr... the beginning, the middle, and the end... omg the end... i wanna cry again :( JohnxMelinda plzz make them be together again!
ugh plz update soon!
Freak Of Music 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
This has truly been one of the best chap ive read in a long time and this really made me cry!



Plz try to update ASAP!
sing gal 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
drama drama drama!but whats life without drama?!
anyways the chapter was very nice and i enjoyed reading it though it was soo sad

and i hope you can update soon!

thanks...
yasminooo 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
did they do it or not ( have sex ) ??
btw, nice chapter =D
bt dnt let them get back together soon cuz john is an ass !! :( :)
yuenmei 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
LOVELY!! at least they're heading towards solving their problems now!! im soo glad they managed to converse with each other! but i hope john will start fighting harder for melinda!! plas let them get bck together soon!! i cant stand the suspense!
9Arsenic3 2009-11-23 . chapter 22
my condolences to you on the passing of your grandmother. Sigh, mel keeps running away
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