Well, good piece of work on family here. I like the way you described the scenario here especially on the baby. It seems rather dramatic in a good way. Apart from that, nothing much to say. Sorry if this review is short. My brain isn't functioning well now because I'm in a state of slightly bad mood due to a stranger in a Facebook game app putting a bounty on me for no reason and I just can't play the get-back game at him atm. :S Anyway, thanks for your review on The Eternal Grail. Hope to see your pay back review for it soon. :)

aw,, how cute. I like you have put it. I bet it must be a wonderful thing, I remember my neice being born and you can't help but think what has she got the same as you. nicely done.

I adore this poem! And the lack of reviews so far shows how this site has no taste in excellent poetry. Fantastic work all around, especially in the repetition near the end. Love it!