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They say the pen is mightier than the sword
AmethystDancer
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
This poem is really inspiring.
The phrasing was a bit awkward sometime, but the message made up for it.
Quick grammar freak thing : In the last stanza, it should be there instead of their, both times. (there are others)
fakiagirl
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
A very powerful sentiment. It does seem unfair sometimes when the pen is overshadowed by the sword. ^^ A nice message at the end as well! :)
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