SHE SURVIVED! I'm so glad, but now I'm really worried for all of them : ( Thank you so much for updating I love this story X) Can't wait for the next chapter!

thanks for answering my questions lol. Has it really been a month? Oh well, I'm just grateful you updated at all. Ur...This was a chapter of many interruptions I see haha. Poor Alice and Grey, they can't get time alone. I totally understand about school though, it can be a bitch. Ugh. Read any good books lately?

I honestly do not want this story to end :( Actually, I didn't want any of your stories to end but I know they have to :(

I was expecting Jericho to heal Alice but then when he said he couldn't, I was actually starting to freak out and believe she was going to die. I totally forgot about the flowers but glad that Butterfly took initiative and din't take Sh*t from Gabriel.

And Alice, she finally told Grey she loved him, YAY! Grey was so close to telling her though...stupid Gabriel for interuptting their moments, twice now.
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“I’m not done with you yet. I’ve got to see those duck underwear of yours at least once more.” She lazily smiled. “I told you they were fun.”
“What if I were to say that you are the only naked woman I want to wake up next to.”

Those were my two favorite lines of this chapter! ^_^

-Liz :D

Ugh, I have been missing your writing for the past month! I'm so glad you updated! Seems like such a nice reward after all those college apps. LOVE your series! Although I smell an ending soon... Any thoughts on what chapter to end on?

AH! AN UPDATE! lol :) don't worry,school is killing me too I haven't written anything in FOREVER (the answer to how i am:)) on with the review!: I could never abandon u Penny! come on! the chapter was good:) (so happy they're back yay!) you're right though, it wasn't "OMG!" but I don't think it could've been either way, it's kind of a filler chapter and as far as fillers go, can't get better than this one:) please Please PLEASE let Gabriel die S-L-O-W-L-Y and P-A-I-N-F-U-L-L-Y! THANK YOU:) *grin* looking forward to the next update!

It was so good to see another chapter of this up. Ah, so much mortal danger and love, I'm giddy with it. I liked Butterfly's explanation of why she's called Katherine and her desire to go back to that name. Typical Jericho spending all his time not telling her stuff, he has his reasons, but seriously some communication wouldn't go amiss buddy.

Alice and Grey as always are adorable and I'm so glad that she out and told him that she loves him. Puts the pressure on him to pull himself together (once they get through this 'we're going to die' thing obviously!).

I love the idea of Gabriel in a suit with a polka dot tie, I'm sure he manages to make something so silly look thoroughly intimidating.

Love it as always, can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers, Jess

This was such an awesome chapter. I think a bit was rushed, but overall it was interesting.

Did Jericho end up changing her? And I don't get why Gabriel instigated that entire fight, and then told her that Gabriel wasn't allowed to change her anyway. Gabriel seems just a tad two-dimensional to me.

Anyway, it was a cute chapter. Waiting a month for it wasn't fun at all though! Update soon!

Heyy great chapter!! Can't wait for more...
The last month has been pretty boring-sigh-...

It was worth the wait. It was a really good chapter. I'm confused about the way he's supposed to turn butterfly into an immortal though. Shouldn't that be how Gabriel operates? On the other hand, I like the twist. You keep working on making it epic. ~jlr

i hate gabriel. he is so evil

This is so fantastic!
I can't believe I only found this yesterday, and read it all in one sitting last night (my colleagues are probably not too happy that Im so exhausted this morning -- thats what I get for staying up until 3:30 AM!), only to find a new chapter this morning! Wonderful!

Love your characters. Alice, obviously (spunk, awkwardness, guts...) Grey, of course (sexy as hell!...), Jericho (awesome, funny...), Butterfly (entertaining, sweet...), Gabriel (evil, snarky...).

The hints you insert about Alice in Wonderland are great too... I'm honestly not a fan, and having seen the movie or read the book in ages so I feel like a great number of references have passed right over my head. But I really like the idea of the literary parallels you've created!

I must get going, but just wanted to leave you this quick comment.
Looking forward to meeting the big evil boss.
Cant wait for your next update!

Great chapter :] Can't wait for more.

Incidentally... I'm now preparing myself for when I tell my current crush that I like him. Wowza. I probably don't love him as much as Alice loves Grey though. *sigh*

The first thing I want you to know is that I LOVE GREY!! LoL
and I really love how this story is going! With cliffhanger hanging on your last chappie, Just make me addicted! Yay!
Love it when I know that that-gun shot Alice.. Weird? I know.. I just love a story where the girl suffer not that I hate her, I love her too, she is my favorite girl in this story, you know.. Haha
I just have to wait for the next chapter, no?

update update update cause i've spent the past 3 days reading this and now have to wait AHH! need closure hee-hoo hee-ho

wow great story =) please update soon