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kk88ok 2009-10-03 . chapter 24
Why did you make your story end like this? You should've made Cain end up with Cassidy! Anyways can you write a second book about What's A Girl To Do? With the same characters but just continueing on? Please? And if you are can u tell me? And please, please, please make Cain and Cassidy end up together in the second book!(If you are going to write a second book)

Thank you so much!
From:Kk88ok
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 24
Well, I can see that it would be divided into a somewhat short series. It's a very nice read. Easy, relazing, and lovingly sweet.

I do plan on reading the sequel when I get the chance. It's a good ending for the first story because you're ending the little two week setup and Andrew is out of the picture. Now you have the boy drama starting up again, and I hope things turn out well there.

Great Job. Oh, and the little "Denial isn't just a river in Egypt" is so funny! I have to use that sometime now :P
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 23
Very cute, and I'm happy Allen is staying.

Sorry, i forgot to thank you for informing us what was going on with Erik. Now, what's up with Ian. Him and Angie were so cute and then he's like nonexistant.

Still rooting for Cain. Hope things get sorted out.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 22
aw man! Drama, drama, drama. I prefer to write the drama, so much better than living in it.

CAIN HAS TO LIKE HER! You don't just kiss someone to kiss someone. Okay, well some ppl do, but still!

AGH, if he's just messing with her I"m gonna strangle him. But other actions indicate he's not. He's genuine about it. And he might stop smoking, I'm happy about that.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 21
hehe, it's so sweet. Sappy romantic and fluffy all into one.

And its about time! Man, I was waiting for that. lol. So yay, she gets her kiss, so cute!

Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 20
I probably missed ur birthday, so I can't write a one-shot right now. But, review time

So this was good. I'm glad things with Kale are cleared up and that whole jealousy with Cain, it was so sweet. But i would have been teasing him about it to the point where even he would be blushing. (yesh, i just like to that).

So I cant wait to see how this plays out. And allen seems really sweet. Wonder if he gets Cassy??
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 19
Aw, poor Cassidy. I feel for her, I really do. He was the one person she was turning to and he let her down. What a dork!

I saw ur website, and I think it's kool. You're a Christian too! I thought so by your writing. It's kool to see the little things you throw in there about waiting until marriage and not swearing. It still creates a very lovable character, but also gives you somewhat of a role model. I like to think I did the same thing in my *Hero By Design*.

But, thanks for the great story. I'm gonna continue reading now :)

PS- The plot with Cain looks very interesting, can't wait to see how it plays out or what Kale has to say.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-27 . chapter 18
Oh no! It's Andrew (at least, I think that's who it is).

I feel bad for Kale. I mean, they automatically jumped to conclusions because of what some random guy said. He may have just been helping her, and here he is getting a bad rep, when he may have been the good guy.

I'm still rooting for Cain, but I think Kale shouldn't be judged until it's proven to be true. Whatever, I'm gonna keep reading and I will look at ur webpage too.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 17
She so has to end up with Kyle! haha, no i'm still hoping for Cain but you promised surprises and I think that would be surprising.

So, I have to stop reading here b/c I need to finish some other things. But fear not as I will be back!

It's really great writing, I'm enjoying reading every bit of it. Such an awesome title too. So perfect.

So, this is my last review for this evening, but I will be back *mwahahaha*

Keep writing!!
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 16
Yay!! Cain was there ^.^

Okay, so that was really good. I hope she ends up with Cain. IDK, I just like him more. Kale is a good guy, but I honestly don't know. What happened to Erik?? Haven't seen him lately??
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 15
YAY! We see another side of Cain. A rather adorable and quite lovable side.

Still hooked. Gotta keep reading!
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 14
*Shudders* I hate dramatic music.

The chapter is filled with loveable fluff. I really enjoy it. It's a clean story and it keeps you interested. You can see the interesting love triangles, but there's no sleeping around and even if there is suggestive humor, it's mild and keeps the story lively.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 13
Haha, nice. She got him, totally unexpected for him, and I bet it was nice to see him a little nervous.

Poor girl. And I can understand why she doesn't want to open up to Cain, but I can see that he seems to genuinely care.
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 12
Gah, Andrew sounds like such a jerk. Sounds like an overly possessive, lying, cheating scoundrel.

Okay, so I look forward to the next chapter. And Cain, gosh I love that guy :)
Ruby Kart 2009-09-26 . chapter 11
OH.MY.GOSH.

Darn! I so wanna be Cass right now. Sure, Kale can get the sweet talking, but that eventually wears off. And Cain, oh gosh, his sarcasm just never gets old.
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