 Charlee Rayne 2009-08-11 . chapter 13Smile! She's saved. Although it would have been cool to have brought her back after they killed her. |
 Alice 2009-08-10 . chapter 13 OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG YAY :D |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-08-10 . chapter 13Wow Erin, a little copying from the Mortal Instruments Series? Pft, actually it was a lot...but its fine in my book. At least you changed it a little bit, not exactly alike.
I liked this chapter, although at the end, it was a little to friendly with the LORD and Alexa. It also went a tad bit fast, but a lot slower than your other chapters, which was fabulous. The only other thing was that you could have descrobed things better, like the expressions on the werewolves' faces.
And then came the positive! It was wonderfully expressed, arguements and tempermental issues. The sarcasm was perfect and you put in the characters' thoughts wonderfully, putting in their opinions. And I liked the way how the LORD came, it was dramatic and entertaining to read.
So...UPDATE!! |
 WinMyHeart5444 2009-08-10 . chapter 13Finally! Geez, I've been waiting forever! I loved the chapter, the beginning was really cute! The only thing was that you rushed teh trial scene, but the cliff hanger ending made me mad! Please update soon! |
 CrazyInAGoodWay 2009-08-09 . chapter 13love it! post more asap! |
 midnight84118 2009-07-29 . chapter 12dont kill Alexa
great story
keep it up |
 Charlee Rayne 2009-07-15 . chapter 12That's not fair! She was defending herself! That's it! |
 Charlee Rayne 2009-07-14 . chapter 9AW! HOW CUTE! |
 Charlee Rayne 2009-07-14 . chapter 8Course not... |
 Charlee Rayne 2009-07-14 . chapter 7Still waiting for for the terrible part...so she's one of them. Now they can be closer! (I know I'm being unfair, but I'm not in her shoes. :D ) |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-11 . chapter 12Major fluffiness! This chapter was moving rather quickly again but it might be worth it in the end, I love the story oh, so much! Update soon please!
I really hate you for not killing Samael. I was so ** off |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-11 . chapter 11The ending made me so angry! What the hell did ou do that FOR! I so totally hate your guts right now. IHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHAYEYOIHATEYOU!
Well actually this chapter was very nice. I thought you explained the pain very nicely and everything in bewteen. George was such an ** though. Can't wait for the next tid bit of story action! |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-11 . chapter 10Samael sounds like a charming young fellow. I loved this chapter, but I didn't get the gist of why she had to leave. The ending is stunning and now I am off to the read the disgusting cliffhanger you left. Shame, on, you! |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-11 . chapter 9I'm laughing my ** off right now. I liked both chapters and they made me laugh like a complete retard. It seems to be going a tad bit fast though. But I think that just sets the relationship up, giving it more, umphf. :) Again you kicked **! |
 Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-11 . chapter 7Damn all of those stupid, idiotic wolves. I hate them! I think this chapter was good, maybe a little fast but all in all very nicely written. |