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Icyfire4w5 2009-10-24 . chapter 6
"Paris, do you know Helen?"
I swear that Aprodite must have asked this in a silky, seductive voice. :)
(If I were Paris, I would have chosen Athena.)
Icyfire4w5 2009-10-24 . chapter 8
My teacher once told me Sisyphus' story, and I thought that Sispyphus must have been very fed up with himself.
Anyway, I think that the Sispyhus in your story is pitiful but hilarious. Imagine--mopping the floor non-stop!
crackatoa 2009-06-07 . chapter 2
So far I really enjoy the twist on the myths and I think they are very well written. Thanks for the enjoyable read!
HelloLovely 2009-06-05 . chapter 2
Wait, I don't know if you're just like using creative writing or something, but in the original, it's Meleager that she ends up with. Haha, but cute anyways. This is one of my favorites.

Love,
Becca
HelloLovely 2009-06-05 . chapter 1
I always hated Athena in this one. Because, really, she wasn't fair, but she's a Goddess, so who cares?

Love,
Becca
sophiesix 2009-06-04 . chapter 2
Awesome. Love the line "the threat of loss dug spurs into her sides", i can totally picture that. Even though I knew what is supposed to happen at the end, my heart was pounding while she waivered! Thanks!!
sophiesix 2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Oh man, Athena as a high school teacher? Now thats scary stuff! I love how you've transposed the power plays between gods and humans to teachers and students :) Thanks for a great read.
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