I like this a lot. Very different for you, I like it a lot. good use of rhythym, I'm sorry I haven't been checking my FP updates.

This sounds like it's about prom. I don't know if I'm right or not, but it works for me. Haha. I don't know why, but I really liked the "fuzzy glow" part; it's such a great way to express that drunken stupor at the end of the night. The end is a great juxtaposition. Nice poem. Keep writing! :)