Oh Wow, thanks for this ! I thought I was going to have to wait 3 more weeks without any more stories of Keyd or Alan, but I found this. Awesome ! I love knowing what Keyd is thinking, because he never verbalizes what he want to say, I only imagine what's in his mind. He is my favorite character in your story and I love reading about him. He was missing in like 3 chapters or so and I missed him so much ! Now that he was back in the final 2 chapters of Nocturne I was in heaven. His shyness and vulnerability are so indearing you just want to hug him. Then he turns around and is very much a Dominant figure who knows what he wants and reaches out and grabs it, it make one melt ! Thank you for your story and hope you continue, because you are a brilliant writer with an ability to make you characters seem almost real although they have wings and magic and powers. I flail in my seat whenever you update. Really, arms and all ! Please continue on this story, you are making so many people happy. Thank You again from a fan of your writing. Peace Out!

Reading this was really interesting, and I'm looking forward to more. It's great, seeing Keyd's side of things, and I don't think it will be boring even if we do already know most of the major plot points from reading Alan's side. Since Keyd is such a quiet and closed off character, especially early on, it's interesting to see what was really going through his mind, and how much Alan misjudged his actions.

okay, so i'm pretty much a die-hard fan of this series you've done. :D
and i haven't really reviewed any of your other stuff [which i will!], but consider
this review a ... plea for another chapter. haha. i'm kind of addicted.

you're such a great writer! best of luck to your creative writing career.
you've got a way with words; many wish they had but a small amount of your talent.

Oh my gosh it's so cool to FINALLY be able to tell what Keyd is thinking. He's always been so mysterious and cool. =]

A wonderful addition! It's difficult to write the same story from another perspective; the characters voices try to mix sometimes and the like. However, I have a good feeling about this one. I'll wait (im)patiently for more.

OH KEYD YAY. He thinks pretty much like I thought he would think.

Wow, so many time I wished I knew what Keyd was thinking! And here we have it!

I'm also thrilled to see Alan from an outside POV. Maybe because it's Keyd's POV, but he seems more fragile here.

Cute. :)

Hmm, it's interesting also, to see KEyd's POV of the human world.

Awesome work here! Its kinda funny seeing things from Keyd's POV!

Hi! I'm too lazy to review most stories, even though I love this series - I especially like how you've given Alan character and strength without him appearing to be aware of it - but: KEYD! YAY! Seriously, he's been fascinating from the very beginning, and who isn't a sucker for tall dark and handsome? ;)
I hope you update this sooner than you expect!

I just went /completely/ fan-girly again with excitement of reading Keyd's side of the story..

Couldn't help it! :D There's just something about Alan and Keyd that is so squee-worthy.

And lol, getting inside Keyd's head is good to find out what he's thinking as he's so.. silent from Alan's POV.

So yes, I liked it!

'dudette