Well, they might have been at one point or another...

This is sounding good! I think I'll read more of this.

Wow. Okay, short ass chapters. Not happy. Love the fire though! And who really needs romance in every book?

And another great hook! I applaud you. :)
But ah, I can start to see a plot forming now. It feels like I've seen something like this before...like its been done before. However, I think you'll be able to pull off something great. :)

Now, I usually don't like short chapters, as they feel kind of like dividers between sections that split up the story too much, but I think the way you've arranged it, it's rather nice. Because of the rather "fast-paced" (at least the way I see it) nature of this story, ti works well being divided into smaller sections.

And I must say I laughed at "Oh, yes, I would." Probably because it's so abrupt, but in a good kind of way.

~Sone, from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)

Well, I can gather from your opening sentance that the corpse-robber from the previous chapter was an arsonist of some sort. Another excellent hook.

And OWOW the corpse was related to Alana? I'm used to having the "dead before the story even begins" characters having no way of relation to the MC, but you twisted that nicely. Something new. :)

~Sone, from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)
(bare with me on these. We have to put them after every review we give. ;P)

You have a very very good hook for this story. I immediately wanted to read on. And the hook itself was very eerie. Grave-robbing? Corpse-robbing, even? Erie indeed.

In the next couple of parapgraphs, however, I think you use adjectives a little too much. As this starts out with robbing corpses, I expected it to be a little bit...action-esque? Maybe not actiony, but hype? Or something to that extent. And we certainly got that, but hype and adjectives don't generally mix well. (Does that make any sense at all?)

~Sone, from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)

The story is good. But, the chapter's a short. But I'm the one to talk. My chapter's are always short. Anyways, I like it.

Keep writing!

I like the sense of mystery that's in this piece. Just develop your characters some more and you'll be on a roll.

Bravo, bravo!

This is really good! I love it! Please, update soon. Also there's a small mistake. [At leas[y], until it met with the same fate as the county's famed, proud, tall city: New York.]

Right there. Once again; Update, update!

First off; I loved this first chapter. Second; I loved this chapter. It held my interest. Unlike some other stories. This is the kind of story I like.

Please, I beg you, update soon.

Wow, I am intrigued! Very intrigued indeed! I absolutely love the flow of words, the tasteful simplicity, and the syntactical balance of a well-executed atmosphere. Your world has style that is dark and horrendous while at the same time I am almost begging to know more. Treat this as a spark and take off with it. Where will it go? You, the writer with spontaneity can only show us.

This would have been a very grizzly story and I'm itching to find out more about the outcome of this world. What happened? Who is that man and what is fueling his hate towards the human race? So few words with an outstanding concept. Make something out of it. I dare you. -EH