Loved this poem; great imagery, especially the first stanza.

beautiful.
oh, the pain of love.

Your use of the word 'penetrating' was quite powerful--the 'sexual' nature of that word made the 'glass imagery' that much more shocking and horrifying. I also liked the fact that the speaker often 'murders' their secrets--how fascinating. Keep up the good work. :)

perfectly disturbing.
i especially love the idea of drowning secrets,
very very nice.