Wow, this is so beautiful. My favorite is the third stanza, just everything about it is so perfect. I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!

I like this. Good work (:
Faith

Your opening and closing stanzas were very strong.

I have to say that the middle lost me just a bit in terms of narration, although overall I really enjoyed the piece. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.