Wow, that was pretty friggin' sweet.

I love your description. Personally, I'm a sucker for it, and yours was practical for this genre of writing but at the same time avoided clumsiness.

I also like the premise of the story. The way you unfold the plot is really well-done, and makes me anticipate the next chapter.

Please update soon!

-Stardust.

Ohmygosh! I would go CRAZY in this world you've presented us! No taste? No SOUND?! And Eli's fate... I would lose my mind. I would lose my freaking mind.

Anyway, haha... I liked how real you made this scary, scary world. You really put me into it and, clearly, got a reaction, lol. I didn't really like the scene with Jack, though... seemed a little rushed and confusing. I'd've at least liked to know *why* they were taking away the senses. And do they take away their own?

So yeah. Nice job. I hope this never ever happens!! Lol.

0_0 That was spooky. I like it :D

I really like the general concept, the way you conveyed the idea of the future.
It was very well written.
It seemed a little dragged out, but that's probably just me. Idk.
All in all, I liked it.

Keep up the good work :D

woah, dude. this is slightly creepy, but really cool! great job. :D