Enchanting and utterly beautiful. It certainly quinched the thirst of eagerness of my soul to finish. The melody was so well written and uplifting, in it tone of negativity I realized that it had an uplifting quality about it, just like the imagery you used throughout the entire story,

The mystery of the woman was clear to me that she was unfortunately a fallen angel and I was moved to tears at how well this was presented and how much emotion was in it.

Oh God I can't think of anything else to say, since it left me in tears for when she had to leave and I was left wondering had she been forgiven or was that her punishment to try and minister to the forgotten and down trodden souls.

Suspenseful and thought provoking, loving and all around fantastic.
This was one of the best stories I have read here and I am really glad you decided to share it.

Momo author of My Queen - Pay it forward the Roadhouse

I like it much better than the 1. version. I hope you will update soon!
Franziska