Haha i like this, it was short and sweet.

Yay yay yay! :P

It was very well written. No excesses. (so necessary to a one-shot)

did i say yay?

Sukanya

aw, perfect place to stop :)
i loved the simplicity, too. :D
very cute!

I loved the story!! It's very well written!! I hope you win, or already won, the award!!

First of all, I love Regina Spektor's The Call, my heart was practically melting when I first heard it on the second Narnia movie.

Your story was undeniably sweet. And you've done a great job executing the challenge response.

The only thing though, was that I felt it was too short. I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I love it anyway.

I'll vote for you on SKOW. (promise!)

-hugs-
Fleur

This was cute =) I think if you'd left off that last bit, though, this piece would have been stronger. But overall, this was good.

-Steph

A definite yay! :) utterly sweet! love it! It reminded me of a manga I once read where the MC also had showcased a painting of the girl he's in love with :) Nice job again!

I liked it. Short and sweet!

Cassandra

YAY! So sweet.

Very nice and sweet. I like it. ;)

Young Love. Huh. It really is ;)
I wish someone'd make me a painting. A nice one. That someone being someone I liked, preferably, too.
But what I do like is your story. It is LIKED! =D

Very sweet! :)

I liked this. I liked the way you didn't have them meet face to face in the end (although it is obvious that they will end up seeing each other) and that it was through a painting of each other. I thought it was original =)

~Mia

I really like this story. Very cute, but there is one thing that just really irks me: the punctuation.

You write: "Hey", when the punctuation should be inside the quotation marks, not outside. Like: "Hey,"

That's all. :)

Definitely yay! Lol. That was sweet and lovely. I liked how it wasn't overly cheesy and left the ending to one's imagination. Cute, in my opinion you've done justice to the challenge.