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Keela1221 2009-09-03 . chapter 4
This story and the 1st one were honestly I think the best story I have read on here. Thank you so much for posting! It was pretty much literary genious. Go you, go you and your geniousness
Rhod 2009-07-27 . chapter 4
Cruel yet beautiful, the harsh truth of reality.

I like your writingstyle, it's kinda ... um, delicate?
Blo0d StaiNed Rose 2009-07-05 . chapter 4
wow..am so sad it ended but i think it was a good ending...very cleverly written..sorry for not reviewing before.. but i was on holidays with no internet...:) good job
Dramatizer 2009-07-03 . chapter 4
SHIT I LOVE YOU.

The best ending ever. Seriously. I'm teary-eyed. >:
animebuddy 2009-06-29 . chapter 4
Aw, it's over. I feel sad. :(
Usually, cheating is something that I despise. There are no second chances, I'm not going to forgive someone if they cheat. But the circumstances around how Addison went about it are forgivable. The fact that it wasn't planned, that he wasn't looking to cheat in the first place, helps him in my eyes. Also, the fact that he was, in a way, seduced and he realized it was wrong before it was over and stopped it AND was going to tell Tria even though he had no idea Tria knew, that honesty is what allows me to accept that Tria ultimately forgave him. If it had been any different, I think I would've been highly dissatisfied with the way things turned out.

Sometime today, I will read what is posted so far of For I Have Sinned. 8D
SilverBlood17 2009-06-29 . chapter 4
First my unending thanks for making this story, and making it great. It was beautiful. I really liked that they took things slowly for once and also that they developed trust again. It was an extremely simple chapter. However, it was very rich and probably answered most of the questions out there. That is not to say that I will not miss these guys... I LOVE THEM! You make really deep characters, full of life and intricacies. I hope you continue writing great stuff (I am already reading For I Have Sinned)Still, regarding this story... marvelous ending. Classic and sweet. I'll keep in touch. As always my best wishes.

P.S. Loved the proposal!
StoicCrying 2009-06-28 . chapter 4
Very cute! I love how everything was slow.

xD Job Well Done
writing.is.an.addiction 2009-06-28 . chapter 4
Too freaking cute, as always!
I like the ending but I'm sad to see them go...hopefully we'll see their adorable-ness in micah's story :-D
can't wait to read whatever you write next!
Happy writing :-)
AnswerKey 2009-06-27 . chapter 4
I completely forgot that there was going to be a drabble today, so when I saw this alert in my inbox, I felt really stupid.

Anyways, I really liked how you did this one. It's short and sweet and to the point, and you kinda left it open at the end which is something I love. So sad that there won't really be anymore, but it was fun to read about them and everything.
Blo0d StaiNed Rose 2009-06-21 . chapter 3
i cant wait for next week then...although i might not be able to read it then for am living for a week, but i will try to find connection in the internet and read the drabble...:) i cant wait :D
Siese 2009-06-20 . chapter 3
Yay for happy endings, though honestly I can say from experience that once someone cheats I never take them back. I'm glad things are different with Addie and Tria, though, because their relationship really was too strong to let it go to waste like that.

Looking forward to your next drabble!

Siese
writing.is.an.addiction 2009-06-20 . chapter 3
Oh my fucking god.
Yes, I swore but no, it doesn't mean it's bad. In fact, I quite like the ending. Scratch that. I a-freaking-dore it. To no end.
I'm going to read the one based on Micah now.
Just, Jesus, don't stop writing.
AnswerKey 2009-06-20 . chapter 3
Yay! They're together! When I read the author note at the beginning, I thought that they weren't going to make up, and I was kind of dreading it. I'm glad you reconsidered the ending. It sucks that most of the chapter had happened on Valentines' Day, but you planned that, huh?

Can't wait for next week!
SilverBlood17 2009-06-20 . chapter 3
First of all THANKS! It was a marvelous ending to a marvelous story. I knew you woul write a great closong for this marvelous couple. I really liked the depth you gave your characters specially in the open soul speeches. I literally cried and laughed while reading this. I am so happy that you considered everything before actually finishing this story. I still think you are a great writer. I will be waiting restleslly for the drabble.

P.S. Thanks for mentioning me in the author's note.

Until nest saturday... and as always My Best Wishes!
StoicCrying 2009-06-20 . chapter 3
-cries- That.was.so.SWEET!

Seriously I love ya! xD The ending was perfect, it was both their faults! (but mostly Addie's)

Can't wait for the drabble!
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