This poem is light but is extremely deep with emotion and love. I'm not particulary keen to writing with a rhyme scheme but you do it rather well and balance a good story all together. First rate poem for sure. You should try the same concept but with the open verse. I think I'll def improve your poetry skills. Keep writing.

Aw, that's really sweet :)

I'm not too crazy about the flow of it though, it seemed a little forced at spots, but the idea and concept was really good and I loved it!

xkatt