|Reviews for Like Wax|
| pixy dust and fairytales 6/10/09 . chapter 1
Very well written. I love it.
| cab fed hig 6/8/09 . chapter 1
i don't like the use of the word 'supremely'-
it doesn't seem to fit with the romantic mood of the poem for me.
but, i love the separation of 'candelight' and then, the simple, but powerful simile at the end.
great work !