**... this was fantastic... great job!

It ends here? This was incredible but it is in need of an epilogue. Like I said before this deserves more reviews.

Wow, I do not understand why this story only has 10 reviews? It's amazingly well written and very sad. This is absolutely fantastic!

Wow, I just came across this and I must confess, it is an amazing piece of writing. Keep up the good work. (:

I liked it so far. The characters are realistic and interesting, there are hints of what happened, but it isn't thrown into the reader's face. Also a great plus is the fact that you are careful to put in paragraphs, my eyes are eternally thankful. ;-)
The only thing that threw me off a little(as in disturbing the flow of the story)were Aiden's thoughts regarding the news. It was probably meant as just another hint at a darker past, but somehow it didn't seem to fit too well. Maybe if you stopped just at Aiden empathizing with the victim and alluding to a knowledge of that club's darker background(...as in someone told him about it, threatened him with it, ect.).
All in all great work though. :-)

It's a great story. I enjoyed every word, and I thank you for that. I can't say I expected Aiden and Jaydin to become a couple but then I suppose it's logical in its own way.
Eric is great, too, I guess he's my favourite. So much compassion and patience, it's incredible.
What prompted you to write this story, by the way? I mean, it's very graphic and very well written. Where did you get the inspiration and the idea?
I hope you'll continue writing, you're doing a great job.

This is a really... scary story... (Not trying to be offensive). Someone i really care about also has been through abuse so the story was just really... scary... It's extremely well written though. It's a brillaint read. I'm glad Jayden and Aiden get togerther.

wow i really liked the story so far. haven't finished reading everything yet but i liked how aiden and jaudin ended with each other. i thought aiden was going to end up with eric but i was secretly rooting for jaydin. glad that turned out right.
well, im off to continue, reading. juast had an urge to comment. thanks for sharing this story~

how stupid of the FBI to announce it was a fifteen year old giving that information!

Scotts going to live with Alex...right?

i dont like the implication about his 'job'...it doesnt sound good in the slightest, (i dont want it to be what im thinking of) will we see more of him? i hope so, i like him :)

i love how protective jaydin is and im glad we saw some of eric this chapter, i liked the double date idea aswell and having a bit more baackground on erica and brandom (who i like by the way)

i also love how micheals nose was shattered :P

I cant remember if you stated that Eric was or wasnt home when Aiden went to therapy, but when Jaydin kissed Aiden in the car, i want to say that i think Eric saw them...i wonder what he'll think.

i was suprised at first when i got the first hint about jaydin, but i do quite like the idea :)

i wasnt sure whether or not aiden was going along with jaydin out of what he felt to be obligation for him or if it was kind of like how he told eric he wouldnt fight him, but its clear that aidens not scared of jaydin so i think this development between them is really nice :) i really want to read their date now, and see how they both handle things

I **WILL** review all of your chapters, i just wanted to review this one to show i am still reading it, you said in your pm how long youve been writing this for, and it shows - youre very talented!

I actually felt nervous for aiden. thats how good of a writer you are.

the party was a good idea for showing how socially awkward aiden is, it was also good to see jaydin with him and how hes figured out how to deal with aiden in a matters hes comfortable with.

Oh my josh! This is back! I was gutted when you took this down!

yay!

I like the interaction between aiden and michael, it shows how aidens views are respectfull and gives you another hint at aidens past, which are layered in very very skillfully.

i know im reading this with hindsight but it is still effective and very well written :) cant wait for more!

are you rewriting this, or reposting the original? im asking because this seems better and more developed than the first (though it might be because it was ages ago when it was up before)