Beautiful, and at the same time very realistic. Great details - his hair, the various kisses, their problems.

Nice! Like the story!

Talk about warm-fuzzies at the end. Holy fack, this was fantastic. Seriously, it was just the right amount of angst, anger, forgiveness and hope rolled into one tidy one-shot. And my goodness that sounded corny right there, but it's true. Thanks for a great read!

This was a really well written story. i was immediately pulled in and was tense until the last line, worried that they might divorce or something!! it was very griping, yet sweet too, the writing was really engaging and their conversation about each other soo sweet!! i felt like awwing through it all!! please keep them coming!!

I really wish I had the words to describe how much I loved this, but oh, words are so imperfect. Really. This was more raw than anything I've read in a while, and so completely gorgeous and frustrating and hopeful and hurt and pure AND! I'm officially in love with the just-in button.

;)becky

So beautifully written. It made me cry! I really enjoyed reading this.

What a sweet, beautiful, insightful story. You really show the way that even two people who love each other deeply can just miss each other so many times, and the consequences if it's allowed to build up. But then- oh!- you show how it's possible to be reconciled, to rediscover themselves and come out with a richer, deeper relationship.