Man, I love this story. Bloor is just so cute and *polite* and thank goodness Dar realized what a great catch he is! :)

I really like the way you tell a story, not only here but in all your stories (that I've read) and I always look forward to a new one. You even manage to make the side characters interesting with only a few sentences, for example Sheppard and Finch, who I feel have a little something going on there *hinthintnudgenudge* ;)

Lots of love,

Trinket

this is absolutely the sweetest story ever. i love the title too. it's perfect.

thank you for writing it!

I love this story. The concept is quirky and original, and Bloor. He's really funny. Equal parts awkward, hilarious, and cute.

AHK, OHMYGOD, that was SUCH AN AMAZING STORY.
One of those quirky little things that you _know_ in your head wouldn't happen, but you can't help but _fantasize_ that it COULD, because the writing made it SO BLOODY BELIEVABLE.

I love your story--it was wonderful writing. I shall look for more things by you, yes indeed, starting right now--and I hope very fiercly that you continue writing.

super cute. lol. i'd like to see someone that polite in the real world.:))

- che

adding this also, because I loved Bloor's hilarious, sometimes unfortunate politeness. also, to remind you that this is a cute little plot, and I really liked Dar and his approach at the end. basically, you will always be awesome.

Good story. I loved it. You have a way of finding the strangest settings... Great work! :)

Great one-shot! Then ending specially was really sweet! :)

I love the ending!B That was so cute! Bloor is adorable! I'm glad Dar made the first move because Bloor clearly wouldn't have!

And I'm glad you posted new stories!

Yay.