you're still awesome. :D

I have to agree with the end being a bit rushed, but tha was pretty much my only complaint with it.
It was really cute otherwise. They were a cute couple, and I especially liked the relationship that Avri and Jett shared. That was so adorable. Haha.
I admit, I don't read many short stories, but I'm really thinking about reading some more. If they're as good as this one, you can bet I'll be reading a lot more.

Wonderful job on this one. I really wouldn't mind if you decided to continue it. Either way, it was awesome! :D

Oho!

I like it, short stories are good cuz they let me get my history paper done on time.

Short stories.. which are continued later? XD XD XD

They make a cute couple.
I think one way to not get impatient with the ending is to write it all and get the antsy out and then go back and expand on it. I have the same problem ^^;;

My only critique would be that the end is rushed, but I guess you already knew that. It started rushing about when the scene comes where Neal leaves. ^^

Otherwise, though, this is a really well told funny story!
I would've loved to have heard more from Jett, too. :)