That was an exceptional piece of work! I love your descriptions.


I would love honest opinions/feedback from a writer like you on some of my work, it would mean a lot to me!

Wow intense. The opening was very good.I liked the way it was written in inner monolouge way not sure why. I aslo liked how you described the disease. Could just be me but i never saw or read a story or movie which described how it happened. Thats why i liked it

This was wicked! It reminded me a lot at the end of A Softer World because of the irony of the situation. But your descriptions were very well done with sensory details and characterization. How you incorporated the girl writing and it being her “saving grace,” then coming back in the end to say that she had written the zombie apocalypse was a really great twist. The only grammatically mistake that I could catch was in, “I will steal hear that throbbing.” Here you’re looking for “still” as opposed to “steal.” Great work, though! Keep it up!