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| Reviews for California |
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   Ander-j-l 3/7/11 . chapter 20please continue this its really good! |
| ModestToTheMaxx 4/17/10 . chapter 20 I LIKE IT |
| paintthewords 1/10/10 . chapter 20 Amazing I love this! |
| Aaerie 1/8/10 . chapter 20 no i cant believe they broke up but maybe she could do blake again pun intended |
| justagirlx3 1/8/10 . chapter 20 god finally i wanted them 2 break up 4 so long! |
| to fall or to jump 1/7/10 . chapter 20 Unexpected twist! It's cute though! Especially when both of the guys were like I'll get it! Yeah! Chad's outta there! Now time for Quinn! |
| A.Rua 1/7/10 . chapter 3 Wow Alli has a lot to deal with haha. Even though I like Blake, i have to say my favorite guy in the story is Quinn so far. He just seems so awsome. It's pretty awsome so far, I hope you update soon. :D |
| dreamercrys 1/7/10 . chapter 20 I kinda knew Kaden was gay...kinda funny that Brad is his boyfriend... I'm glad Chad "broke up" with her... Now that means she can make a go at Quinn... :D Can't wait to read Kaden's story either...I think it is going to be awesome. He is very intriguing...Him and Ali are kinda alike. :D |
| angel-fire-007 1/3/10 . chapter 19 Hey! You have an awesome story! I don't know why but I think that it would be awesome if quinn and alli became boyfriend girlfriend. i think that they have some kinda of underlying chemistry... it seems to me that quinn is always there for alli and shows her things about himself that others dont really know. well i think it would be a cool twist to the story. angel-fire-007 |
| to fall or to jump 1/2/10 . chapter 19 LOL! OLis funny keep him! And why doesnt she realize her undying attraction for Quinn and dump Chad already? |
| justagirlx3 1/2/10 . chapter 19 lol i like oli i want him 2 stay and screw shit up :) |
| sophiesix 1/2/10 . chapter 18 my god this girl gets all the goods. how jealous am i. so olli, huh? reminds me i have to read your other stuff... happy new year! |
| craziebabe45 1/1/10 . chapter 1 Good first chapter. There were a few spelling errors such as "If you do step, pile, jump it will work better than step, step jump" I only noticed that it should say "plie" because I'm a dancer. Otherwise good so far! |
| dreamercrys 1/1/10 . chapter 19 I think if anyone can chase off Oli it will be Quinn... Quinn seems to make Ali feel things she has never felt before... I think having Oli there for a little while to "disturb" things is going to be entertaining... Can't wait for more fun and to see what he father is like... ;D |
| to fall or to jump 12/31/09 . chapter 18 LOL! Olli's here! Great chapter I love Quinn! Lol at the birthday party! She got a car... lucky... What's with all the horrible cliffs? ( |
