This is really well done, really beautiful.
I like it as a ficlet. I'm sure I'd like it as a full-blown as well, but you can do whatever you want with it. It'll still be lovely.
Brilliant!
~Illy
Frail.Wings.of.Vanity 2009-06-10 . chapter 1
Ohh, nice story.
I have an idea for a one-shot in mind too,
I just haven't gotten anywhere with it yet. -__-
Anyway, it was really, really good. I liked it a lot. The idea was cool.