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Isca 2009-06-11 . chapter 1
"Today is hushed." Excellent opening line. I love the somber, soothing feeling it exudes.

"I wonder...if you can even see the sky." Oh, this line is so angsty and heart-wrenching.

The sadness in this poem is almost gentle, like a dying winter breeze.
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