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Reviews For: January 2009, Part 2, Passing The Old People Home
Isca 2009-06-11 . chapter 1
"As rooms wait for beds to grow cold." This is one of the best similes I've read for awhile. The coldness in a room presumably represents an absence of life. The imagery is quite startling and profound.

"I remember your voice moving over the pages of books." This line is so raw, vivid, and romantic. :)
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