Yay! I'm so glad you uploaded this!

It has promise to be my favorite of yours. I just love seeing loads and loads of characters all mesh together

I like the style this is written in- short segments from each person's POV that when put together make up a whole rainbow of... Idk what I was going for there, but you get the point :D

The only thing I noticed was a few grammar errors, nothing major enough to point out (Besides, who knows if MS Word is even right? XD)

Anyways good luck, I can't wait for chapter two!

(I would've said more, but I gtg TT_TT)