LOVE IT!

I think I'm offically addicted to your writing style. I look forward to seeing this sory develop.

I actually liked the chapter, except for the baby falling that hurt me a tad. But I still liked it.

And yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter of Wonderwall!

Okay, so. Wow. I really, really loved this chapter. So much happened, wow. But I really loved it. And I am still reading Wonderwall, if it's of any consequence. I actually just got obsessed with covers of songs and so I downloaded all of the "Punk Goes" albums. AND on the Punk Goes 90's album, there's this amazing cover of Wonderwall by Cartel. I'm sure you don't care, but I felt I needed to share my enthusiasm with someone. Okay. I'm done rambling. Great chapter, really. 8)

Wow! That kinda threw me for a loop! I kinda thought that lindy would get to see carter with remy but it didn't happen the way that I imagined. I love this chapter! Oh and i'm still reading wonderwall so don't you dare put down that pen! Oh and quick question why is it called wonderwall? Anyways... I enjoyed myself. Keep it up!

That was sort of intense - the way the emotions ran up and down. And I'm glad they're going to be friends.

Great chapter. I'm happy with it too (LOL)

i really like this story. it's got a different feel than a lot of stories right now and is written well.

however i guess i've got some creative criticism. i'm an emt and i know most people don't understand the difference between an emt and a medic. paramedics have more schooling, can administer medication and usually have a specialty. ex:heart problems. emt's are the people who will first respond to 911, transports, and private calls.
and if her arm was broken it would be splinted.

sorry. i'm not trying to be a hardass on you!

O I like this one very much!! Very nice work!! Hurry and write some more pretty please!

great story!!

I was just thinking about this story earlier today, and what do you know, you updated!! Really made my day. :) And I can't wait for you to update Wonderwall as well.
Anyway, this was a really nice chapter. Lindy and Carter are just too cute for words!!

Lovely job!

This story is a cheese fest.
And not in a good way.

Great story you've developed so far! I really like Lindy and Carter's characters and their backgrounds right now. I can't wait to find out more about Lindy's ex-boyfriend too. Update soon please!

WOW! I'm lovin this story. The first chapter had me a tad confused as to who paul was and what was goin on with the dad but I've got it now! This is great! I love the third chapter the way it is. Showing Carter's interaction with the baby shows a softer side to him. I actually think that the scenes with him and Remy are my favorite! It's just so basic and down right fatherly sometimes. I love it! Keep up the good work! GIMME MORE!

I liked the chapter, even if it's a butt for giving you trouble.