Cute! I would very much love to read more!

GLEE! MORE! This pleases me greatly :3 I love Kirby. And I finally remembered that braces are suspenders ^^; Here they go on your teeth, so when Adelaide was pulling his braces...I was rather alarmed O.o
Anyway! Way sweet. I want to know the story behind the ring :3 AND A DATE! They're going on a date! SQUEE! Adorable :3 Um. Yes. I'm rather enthused >.>
And that sci-fi beginning? LAWL. I'd watch it :D

I teared up ^^; Funeral stories do that to me. And I hope I can burn someone from beyond the grave! Rhys totally reacts to stress like I do. And Kirby is a sweetheart. Ah, I loved this :3 A lovely break from essay-writing.

Very engaging read. I felt myself tearing up at the funeral, and the end? Hehehe

Aw, this was so sad... yet at the same time somewhat sweet? Yeah, great story. I don't like Kirby too much, but Rhys is a pretty cool main character.

Rhys = awesome.

the end of this story was so cute!
i loved in, hope to read more of your writing.

:o So cute.

Haha, everyone turned this into an angst-but-not-really challenge.

But thanks for the entry!

I like Kirby and Rhys, and Ed and Carys were very entertaining.

Hahaha, Grease. Yes. Beautiful.

I think this was sweet. I liked it a lot. Kirby's so cute in my mind... I can just see him now, you know? And Rhys, Rhys is super-adorable.

Very cute story. Good job :)