My escapist mind loves this! It's fantasy and reality at the same time, and I got a "blurred" association because of it. But a good "blurred" of course- like I couldn't (and didn't want to) tell what was real. This is a beautiful description, wonderful poetry. Keep it up and thanks for the review!

I got a target ad for High Fructose Corn Syrup under this. haha. I like this a lot, there's a beauty in this place, I promise. the opening imagery is very nice.

This is really really good! I like your writing style. Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^