| Reviews for Not Quite Off the Hook |
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gulistanlik 9/4/10 . chapter 14Sandra deserves every bit of this in my opinion. She had every sign that she was still in love. She was just too stubbourn and her pride got to her. |
gulistanlik 9/4/10 . chapter 13I don't get it. She says I'm just not ready and the next day he goes and gets another girl. She didn't say never. Would it hurt to wait? What kind of a guy is he? |
InsertCreativePenName 9/3/10 . chapter 35*cries* wonderful ending. there is no words to describe how it was! |
chazza-x 8/31/10 . chapter 23I love this story, its so addicted. But I need to say (A, - now i havent finished this story so idk on how this ends- but Lucas likes you |
gulistanlik 8/31/10 . chapter 12Ugh! What is wrong with her? It's obvious she's gotten over the cheating and his lapse in sanity! So what's holding her back? Instinct? |
gulistanlik 8/29/10 . chapter 5I admire Lucas for trying but he's going to hit his breaking point soon, isn't he? Oh dear. |
gulistanlik 8/29/10 . chapter 3Thank you, Lucas seems to have some sense knocked into him! |
gulistanlik 8/29/10 . chapter 2Why did she leave in the first place? Is it going to be explained later? |
AnnabelLloyd97 8/29/10 . chapter 35I love you so much for not making them stay broken up I was so sad when that happened. I'm going to miss reading this story so much. Just a little question ARE YOU AND RL LUCAS TOGETHER YET AND IF NOT WHEN WILL YOU BE? I certainly see a lot of chemistry in those little chats that you posted and I definately think that he likes you why else would he have kissed you? |
AnnabelLloyd97 8/28/10 . chapter 25I honestly think that you and real-life-Lucas like each other and you're just trying to hide it. Anyway I don't know how I would live without the real-life-Lucas update, you two crack me up. Unfortunately, I don't live in London but I live in England so I have visited there a lot and when I'm older I would love to live in either London, New York, California or some massive Ski Resort (maybe even in Canada) |
AnnabelLloyd97 8/28/10 . chapter 15Those conversations with the Lucas in your class are so funny. |
buttermilk 8/7/10 . chapter 35Love the storyy! i remembered reading a while back, but it wasnt finished then. then just happened to stumble across it again! and i have to tell you it wass super greatt! :) |
mesweetescape 7/12/10 . chapter 35I love your story! I completed it in exactly 24hours. Go me! bahaha. I would say I can now read Sherlock Holmes, but my brother stole it, go him. As usual, your story still amazes me, with the characterization and so forth. I love TROY AND NATE. Well i love Lucas too but that just feels wrong haha. O.o speaking of Lucas, your RL lucas is CUTE. But i can understand why he's so annoying. You two shud get together ;D. Hahaha. By the way despite the awesome story of yours, you do have a few spelling and grammar that never ceases to annoy me. Like 'interfear' is 'interfere' and 'trans' is 'trance' also, you dont put question marks in alot when the character asks a question, rhetorical or not.. Other than that I youre story is super great and I love it. Keep writing stories! |
fariswheel 6/22/10 . chapter 25Wow, that's a lot of reviews! Congrats! |
Eva 6/15/10 . chapter 19 Lol, when i read the "You're so in love with me" my immediate response would'eve been something along the lines of "You got me" or "No shit sherlock" or maybe even "Bite me" Hilarious. |