|Reviews for Sorry I trusted you|
| Pegasus Rider 11/21/10 . chapter 1
The grammar needs...work. I think that it is too short other than that, and you keep repeating what you have already said. I know that is a style, but not in this case.
| Said Author 6/11/09 . chapter 1
Loved the rhyme and the way you capitalized some words for emphasis. Nice work! :}
| lilcarts21 6/11/09 . chapter 1
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!
| SeriesMakers'2 6/11/09 . chapter 1
wow...that was deep...
good rhyming...(i don't know if I spelled that right.)
that was a really nice poem