Excellent. I can really get a sense of the impending danger gettign ever closer, and the fact you spent so long setting up these characters means I actually care about them being in danger

Avalbane was a good choice! I'm really enjoying this, which is nice because I usually don't like the whole zombie thing. The whole family dying was very sad, but Aelra's death was the worst to read about (for me). I look forward to the next chapter!

Good start. You might want to contrast between the then and now a bit more, though ^_^ *continues reading*

I like this. I particularly like the scattershot style which lends it a real personality

Wow, I am so transfixed on this story!
Yes there's a lot of stories out there about the zombie apocalypse, but it never gets, old, yet with your story, I love how you made the characters seem so real, that I can relate to.
You write incredible! With the details and the plot, you keep the story moving forward, and you keep readers, like me, hooked. You have an amazing talent, and I hope that you keep writing and do something with it. I absolutely love your story and you are a great storyteller, that I can't wait for the next chpater.
Keep writing!
-SK

Avalbane, i think it would be good from her point of view...
Or Nathan:)

Good luck on choosing, can't wait till more!

I think it's a good idea to write the story from one character's point of view; it will be much easier to follow. I would write it from Jeremiah's or Avalbane's POV (if Avalbane, of course she'll have to take on more of a personality.) Whatever way you go with it, I'm definately looking forward to reading it! Good luck with NaNoWriMo :D

aw, thats really sad, i enjoyed all the different points of view...

obviously, i say avery. (because he is just too sexy. and i can't believe you only said , "the one with anger manage problems," HE IS SO MUCH MORE THAN THAT.)

but i wouldn't really count my vote, as i'm not as interested in this story, becoming all one person, first person as it will.

hover skating. gotcha, see the first time i read that i missed the 'hover' part of it.. so i was really confused... and then you said "the main mode of transportation was by foot." and i thought but... roller skating IS on foot... me is so ignorant sometimes. SO ANYWAY i am FINALLY reviewing. and it was good, of course! i liked it. but i have a question, why did they say “What's that?” hadn't they already passed w-oh NEVER MIND, i just went back to the beginning.. sorry i have been misreading too much of this chapter. GOTCHA.

Hey! Haven't talked in a while:) That was an awesome chapter! Now I'm more excited to read on and see what happens!:)

Great work!:)
-Somer

Awesome chapter! Keep it up!

They saw another human zombie thingy i bet! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Astarel likes story. Astarel also likes how she refers to self in third person. Astarel follow. :P

I'm not one for horror stories...well horror anything really, but this story is great enough that even I can enjoy it! I can't wait for the next update.

O.o so cool.. i could never be able to write as good as that! you're amazing! love the title too!