Wow, that was a step back from the normal fluff/romance stories I usually read. A good step I'd say. I really like how the story involves two people commiting an act frowned upon in most christian religions. Suicide and Lust. But in the end are tied to God simultaneously. I usually don't enjoy angsty stories, but I liked this one. Fav'd. And good job.

Wow. That wwas intense! odd how at the same time One ejaculated, the other died. I wonder if the one who died felt God too. Sorry I'm submitting an anonymous review. I don't have an account yet. well good luck with your writings!