Aw.. this chapter was really cute. I like when her brothers yells out Lukie Pookie. That wa so funny. :D

That was great! All the jokes were really funny and added a lot to the story. I think the pool was my favorite part. :D

This is probably your best chapter yet! I like the part where Tony's a werewolf. :D I can't wait for the next chapter.

Halloween? Awesome :) I love halloween xD

Can't wait for more!

I'm so ready for Halloween!! Lol. Post more soon please! :-D

I liked it :) Can't wait for more!

and sorry it took so long for me to review... I was out all last weekend.

My favorite part's where Andrea is extremely worried about Andrew even though he's always late. LOL. It was definitely worth the wait to read the latest chapter! :D

I like the texting xD It was fun. And this was a good chapter :)

That was the best chapter yet! It was really exciting.

Hmm... it's good so far.

If you'd like more reviews, maybe you could change the summary into something where the readers know more about the story. Like some dialogue.

And when writing, make sure that it's also easy to read. Maybe it's just me, but in long paragraphs, I get lost and bored... So maybe you could condense them?

But other than that, it's a good plot :)

This is good so far :)

Amazing story so far! The characters seem so REAL! I can't wait for the next football game to find out what kind of mess Marie gets into next!