Following your advice on your profile... I read it. And again, Love it! Just that at the end, I would have wished for more on Caleb and Adele's meeting... But hey, being the romantic girl that I am, it's just to be expected...

Great story again :D!

OMG that was amazing! I love it! That was seriously one of the best short stories I've read in my life!

ZOMG SO FIRGIGN GOOD YET SO SAD!I LOVE IT!watch out that might some day be me...lol no seriously i may just be like "fuck it all"and shove a knife through my body with my blood glistening in the light*obviously daydreaming*...HU?ooh yea out of 1 to 10?i give it a 3,489,765!yesh i liked it that much!

:[ tear tear this was tragic and ever so sad. Ending did turn out happy but depressing how it got to that part. Surprisingly though for being a straight couple and no sexytimez this was a very decent type of story. I love your writing abilities and how you can make an idea just flow out on paper into a marvelous reading. Let me know if you ever write a book so I can purchase it. :]

That came out better than I thought it would. It was freat Jessica I loved it. By the way I'm mentioned in the end that made me happy. The names were god.

Okay now its time for me to criticize how romeo and Juliet I find it. I know I know Romeo and Juliet are classics and their love story is this great love story. But you know me and tragedies. Though this tragedy had a happy ending in a wierd way. Adele had reason to kill herself more than Juliet i think, personel anyways.

Oh have i ever told you Shakespere is a crook. He stole Romeo and Juliet storline from Greek Mythology.

What a loser...though i did like midsummer night dream.

And Romeo and Juliet had grown on me. By the way remind me to let you read the poem I did of them.

Congrats on story, it was greatas usual.

I enjoyed it, ver interesting. My favorite line was "Loving you until the end of foreve- because r ends it"

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Ohmge! I LOVED it jessica. OhMIGOD!