[Is it a way full of roses with thorns?
Is it a way full of thorns with roses?] I love those lines. So thought-provoking.

[Actually the difference no matter] This seemed off grammatically. Maybe “doesn’t?” instead of “no?”

[never to lock back] lock = look?

Nice concept as a whole. It seems to be about a relationship at first, but then you broaden it so much with the line “Life is so, right?”

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

(Ah, sorry, I just looked at your reviews and noticed that this is almost exactly the same as Mini’s ^^;)

"Actually the difference no matter"... Awkward phrasing "Actually the differen't doesn't matter" or "Actually, it doesn't make a difference" would be better

"meanwhile I choose never to lock back."... look

"Cos it's a way without roses, it's just thorns"... 'Cause

I like the whole rose/thron thing. You discuss it in a different way than I usually see. Nice job!

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).

Someday I'll count all the stars in the sky,
maybe we'll meet there again as we used,
meanwhile I choose never to lock back.

I love this!

Nice work!

Lovely piece, what else can I say? :) Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

"Maybe you'll understand me a little more." The tone of this line is so sorrowful. It's sad that people often misunderstand each other and miss out on a lot of good relationships.

"It's a way without roses." Beautiful line. Sometimes 'the road less taken' is the better path to choose. :)

I hope it's Is it a way full of roses without thorns!
A beautiful song!

Someday... Wait for

I loved that line, it was beautiful to me. Great poem!