wow!this poem speaks to many different parts of my emotions;) i cant imagine what you must have been thinking or feeling when you wrote this poem? and of course there is no criticizing a poem, who can criticize something from the heart? i feel poetry is art, and you should be shown over the world, displaying your pieces to those who already appreciate art, and giving people who dont a whol new veiw.

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I love this poem. Perhaps it's because I love astronomy, but what's a little bias? Not sure about the title. The only thing that drew me in was the galaxy bit. However, it seems every other poem on here is "tear-stained." other than that, wonderful piece.

Mars, the god of war, bursting into flames...

Venus, goddess of love, crying alone...

Earth - Deity of ignorance.

This was really nice! And very original with the planets and such. Nice work! :}

I really liked this. I have the feeling that it's an extended metaphor, right? Anyways, I still really liked it. Good job.