I know that I'm still reading Mizuki AND Ai No Saori but I wanted to actually get through something from chapter one of yours. I won't quit reading your works because of what you said about Sacrifice.

Even though it was a little uncalled for, it was still just an opinion. Everyone has their days too so I can't really judge.

To the story- I think you have a good first chapter and you do a good job at bringing the plot into perspective and setting things up. I can't wait until you write another one. I'll definitely be waiting for it.